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 Script - FINAL FINAL FINAL!  Thursday, September 24, 2009 @ 12:19 AMHELLO, THIS IS THE MOST MOST MOST FINAL SCRIPT! No more changes will be made to it. JIAYOU! 206A-2 FTW :D Frame 1 Freeze when you finish your lines. Gennie: Line 1: (looks down diagonally to the side) why is he abusing his own daughter? Line 2: (look up) She is his only child. Line 3: I have to help her. Gynn: (the stick and box) Line 1: He knows too much about my debts and gambling den. Line 2: he must die. (hits gennie. Gennie falls behind box; run back to gennie with bottle) Line 3: (faces Grace) my daughter is better off dead too. Fang Min: Line 1: (stand up and look down) No! why is he abusing me? Line 2: (Looking down, walking forward) I’m his only child! Line 3: (Bends down) Doesn’t he have any feelings left for his family? Yu Jun: Line 1: (Sad. Don’t do big actions) Why is he making us suffer like this? Line 2: (Sit down on the sofa) I regret marrying him. Line 3: Why? Why did he change from before? Ling Li: (hiding behind box) Line 1: (Very sad; walk so that audience can see) He killed Nicholas! Line 2: Police! Police! Line 3: I’ve got to tell them everything! Xiao Chou: Line 1: (Rude gesture) What the hell! Line 2: Who called the police? Line 3: Now my gambling den is ruined! (kick the chair) Angela: Line 1: Oh no! What happened? Line 2: I must not get involved in this. Line 3: Quick! Before the police come! Yu Xin: Line 1: The police? Line 2: Where’s the money? (pick up money) Line 3: (Greedily) it’s mine. Frame 2 Change in position : L1, L3, L4 off. Gynn goes to centerstage (L2) Gambling den > arrange tables. XC, YX, AC sit on chair. Family house > YJ sit properly on sofa, FM go to coffee table do homework. Warehouse > LL and GN gather around LL’s boxes. Gynn: Line 1: (Shocked face) How did this happen? (Walk towards the centre of the stage) Line 2: I remember (pause) we were still a happy family a few weeks ago. Line 3: It all started (slow) at that time… (look far out in the distance) All lights on. Yuxin moves to centerstage. Yu Xin: Line 1: (Walk to Gynn) Hello brother! (tap on back) (Gynn : Oh, long time no see Chu Beng!) Line 2: Heyhey (whisper), I got a good deal for you! (Talk and walk) Line 3: Come along to earn quick money! (Gynn tries to protest but Yuxin insists) (Gynn : What’s that?) Line 4 : You’ll see. (end at L4 section) Xiao Chou and Angela start walking out of gambling den. Angela wait at the side. Xiao Chou: Line 1: (Walk around Gynn) Finally! Our next victim! Line 2: All we have to do is to land him in our debt! Line 3: Jessica will definitely be able to deceive him! (beckon to Jessica, point at Gynn) Angela: (Walking to Gynn; bimbotic) Line 1: Here comes another idiot… (look into mirror) Line 2: Money just keeps rolling in sometimes. (giggle) Line 3: All I have to do is just mmm… Angela drags Gynn to den, Xiao Chou and Yuxin walk together. All freeze and sit in gambling den. Yu Jun: (Paranoid) Line 1: Is that the door closing? (look to the back, look over at her shoulders) Line 2: Again! Where is he going at such a late time? Line 3: (Pause 3seconds. Look down) I shouldn’t be too paranoid… Fang Min: Line 1: (Scratches head) Oh! Where is daddy when I need him? Line 2: I don’t know how to do this question! Line 3: Perhaps Nicholas would know… (calls Nicolas) Gennie’s phone rings. She holds it up. Lingli appears from behind. Ling Li: Line 1: Is that Nicholas’s phone ringing? Line 2: Is that Grace calling? Her again!? Line 3: What is their relationship? (bang box, stare at gennie with suspicious eyes) Gennie: Line 1: Oh it’s Grace! Line 2: Sarah is being paranoid again. (glance at lingli) Line 3: Even though I told her countless of times that there’s nothing between me and her! Frame 0/3 - Dialogues Make a lot of noise at the gambling den. Gynn keeps drinking beer. Gambling den: Yuxin: [Gynn stands up. Yuxin stands up too, push Gynn down gently] Don’t go! Gynn: But it’s quite late… Yuxin: Let’s have a few more rounds. (knock table) Gynn: I don’t know… I might lose money… Xiaochou: Don’t worry! I’ll lend you some! (Gynn hesistates) Angela : Yes, stay awhile longer, I’ll go get some beer. (Gynn stops hesitating and takes the money) Everyone in gambling den continues playing. Just don’t stop. At home: Yu Jun: It’s late… I don’t even know where he is…[calls gynn] Gynn: it’s my wife again…[slams phone] Angela: [picks up and answer when gynn not looking] Hello?! Yu Jun: [Hang up and stay silent, then fall to the ground crying.] (Fangmin rushes over, looks at yujun) Fang Min: Mum! What happened? (bend down to Yujun’s level) Yu Jun: Do you know what your father has been doing? (stare at FM) Fang Min: What’s wrong? Yu Jun: He has been gambling and womanizing! (Stand up, wipe face) Fang Min: What?! Nooooooo~! Fangmin runs behind the sofa (out of the house) to look for Nicholas. Yujun gradually continues sweeping the floor, sobbing in the meantime. Scene 1 Outside the house : Gennie: Didn’t grace say to meet her here? Where is she? (Fangmin bangs into gennie, Gennie calms her down) Ling Li: [stalking Nicholas] Where is he heading to? (keep trying to listen) Gennie: What happened? Fang Min: (in between sobs) It’s my father! He abused us, he gambled, and now he’s womanising! Gennie: (disbelief, firm) What!? (pause) I must talk to your father! Fang Min: No! he’s incorrigible! You should just go home… Gennie: But… Fangmin walks away (goes offstage). Gennie looks on. Lingli: [When gennie turns around, LL came from her hiding place] What was that about? Gennie: (surprised) Sarah? What re you doing here? Lingli: Why was she crying? (concerned tone) Gennie: She’s in trouble! I don’t know the detaisl but she told me her father has been … Gambling den : Xiao Chou : He gets drunk so easily. Take him home. Gynn : I wanna play more… Yuxin and Angela bring gynn back home. At home : Gynn: [drunk] I’m home~ (retardedly) Yu Jun: (covers nose) You reek of alcohol! Where have you been? Gynn: Stop your nagging… (walks away) Yu Jun: [Angrily] I know what you have been doing! At that gambling den and with that slut! [point at angela] Yuxin and Angela : We’ll leave first. Gynn: Hey… (look at YX and AX, then turn back to YJ) Get lost! [Hit YJ] {Yu jun falls unconscious} Yuxin and angela go offstage. Ling Li: What was that? Gennie: I don’t know, but it’s coming from Grace’s house! Lingli and Gennie both rush into Fangmin’s house. Fang Min: [returned] Mom! (faces Gynn) What are you doing to her?! [ran towards the mother] Gynn: She deserved it! And now you too! Gennie: Stop! [Gynn hit gennie and gennie falls to the ground.] (Lingli must be behind the boxes) *flashback officially stop here* * B L A C K O U T * Scene 2 Gynn walks to centerstage. Everyone else goes offstage. Xiaochou and yuxin change to policemen. L1, L2, L3 on. Gynn: it’s not my fault… Fang Min: Why did you kill him!? He was my only friend! Gynn: Shut up! You don’t know anything! [push FM to the ground] Fang Min: No! Go away!!! [Grab a broom and accidentally hit father at the back of his head] Gynn: Ah! [Falls to the ground, dead] Fang Min: (monologue) Oh no! What have I done? (drops the broom, walks away from G) Yu Jun: What… Oh my god! [wakes up to find dead ppl] Fang min: Mom! It was an accident! I swear! [ Cry, run towards YJ] Yu Jun: No! it’s my fault! I should’ve protected you! And since it’s my fault, I shall turn myself in to the police. (look shocked, pause, then look determined) Yuxin and Xiaochou : (appear) Police! Put your hands up in the air! Fang min: No mom! (YJ walk away from L2) Off L3. Fang Min: (emotional) Why must this happen… now… I’m all alone…[sinks to the floor] (*end* for now…) Piano. fangmin! (: Labels: Script Set Wednesday, September 23, 2009 @ 9:46 PM Hello!!! This is the set for our Drama play! Hope its correct and do take note! Angela Chan Labels: set Lights @ 9:41 PMok i have no idea how to do this. The picture below shows our setting. 4 boxes (as shown below) represent the 4 different lights. L1-L4 respectively from left to right. Introduction: Lights on from L1 to L2 to L3 to L4 gradually. At frame 2, off L1, L3 and L4. After Gynn's lines, on ALL lights again. At scene 1, after Gennie and Lingli's dialogues ( ending with Gennie saying "I don't know the details but she told me her father has been...."). Off L1. After YuJun faints, on L1 again. After Gennie dies, BLACKOUT. ON L1, L2 and L3. After YuJun goes offstage, OFF L3.  END -YuXin- Labels: Lights Script - Introduction Tuesday, September 22, 2009 @ 10:32 PM
Labels: Script Sound - Effects & Music Wednesday, September 16, 2009 @ 11:08 PMund for breaking of photo frame (will only be using a small part) : Sound for phone ringing : Sound for gunshot : Emo songs : Anymore suggestions? :/ Fangmin. Labels: Sound Props @ 9:38 PMHello Here are the props we will need: - photoframe (FM) - money notes (XC, YX) - bag for putting lots of money in it (YX) - make-up (AC) - broom (YJ) - handphone (Gy, YJ, FM, Ge) - 4 beer cans/bottles (Gy, YX, XC, AC) - gambling cards (AC) What else? All of you can suggest more props to improve the play! By the way, those who are supposed to bring the appropriate props, please bring them. :) Angela Chan Labels: Props Monologues & Character bio! @ 8:47 PMHELLO PEOPLE. Can you guys upload your character bio and monologues/dialogues (separate posts) to this blog? Pleaseee. If not we are going to fail the process assessment D: Fm. Costume designs ~ =] @ 8:42 PMCLICK TO ENLARGE.   ps. i know its quite blur so if there is any questions, please ask me =] ty: yujun Labels: Costumes Script - Second draft Thursday, September 10, 2009 @ 5:05 PMFrame 1 Gennie: Line 1: (looks down diagonally to the side) why is he abusing his own daughter? Line 2: She is his only child. Line 3: I have to help her. Gynn: (the stick and box) Line 1: He knows too much about my debts and gambling den. Line 2: he must die. (hits gennie. Gennie falls behind box) Line 3: (faces Grace) my daughter is too much of a hindrance to me. Fang Min: Line 1: No! why is he abusing me? Line 2: (Looking down, walking forward) I’m his only child! Line 3: (Bends down) Doesn’t he have any feelings left for his family? Yu Jun: Line 1: (Sad. Don’t do big actions) Why is he making us suffer like this? Line 2: I regret marrying him. Line 3: Why did he change from before? Ling Li: (hiding behind box) Line 1: He killed Nicholas! Line 2: I should have believed him when he told me about the loan sharks. Line 3: Police! I have to call the police! Xiao Chou: Line 1: What the hell! Line 2: Who called the police? Line 3: Now my gambling den is ruined! Angela: Line 1: Oh no! What happened? Line 2: I must not get involved in this. Line 3: Before the police come, I must escape! Yu Xin: Line 1: The police? Line 2: Where’s the money? Line 3: I shall make away with the money! Frame 2 Gynn: Line 1: How did this happen? (Walk towards the centre of the stage) Line 2: I remember we were still a normal family a few weeks ago. Line 3: It all started (slow) at that time… (look far out in the distance) Yu Xin: Line 1: (Walk to Gynn) Hello brother! (tap on back) Line 2: I got a good deal for you! Line 3: Come along to earn quick money! Xiao Chou: Line 1: (Walk around Gynn) Finally! Our next victim! Line 2: All we have to do is to land him in our debt! Line 3: Jessica will definitely be able to deceive him! Angela: (Walking to Gynn; bimbotic) Line 1: Here comes another idiot… Line 2: Money just keeps rolling in sometimes. Line 3: All I have to do is just seduce him… (drag gynn) Yu Jun: (Paranoid) Line 1: Is that the door closing? (look to the back, look over at her shoulders) Line 2: Where is he going at such a late time? Line 3: (Pause 3seconds. Look down) I shouldn’t be too paranoid… Fang Min: Line 1: (Scratches head) Oh! Where is father when I need him? Line 2: I don’t know how to do this question! Line 3: Perhaps Nicholas would know… (calls Nicolas) Ling Li: Line 1: Is that Nicholas’s phone ringing? Line 2: Is that Grace calling? Her again!? Line 3: What is their relationship? Gennie: Line 1: Oh it’s Grace! Line 2: Sarah is being paranoid again. Line 3: Even though I told her countless of times that there’s nothing between me and her! ----------------------------------------------------------------- Frame 0/3 Xiao Chou: Yuxin: (Gynn stands up. Yuxin stands up too, push Gynn down gently) Don’t go! Gynn: But it’s quite late… Yuxin: Let’s have a few more rounds. (knock table) Gynn: I don’t know… I might lose money… Xiaochou: Don’t worry! I can feel that you are getting lucky! (all continue playing) Yu Jun: (already pause) Yu Jun: It’s late… I don’t even know where he is…(calls gynn) Gynn: it’s my wife again…(slams phone) Angela: (picks up and answer when gynn not looking) Hello?! Yu Jun: (Hang up and stay silent, then fall to the ground crying.) Fang Min : Fang Min: Mum! What happened? (bend down to Yujun’s level) Yu Jun: Do you know what your father has been doing? (stare at FM) Fang Min: What’s wrong? Yu Jun: He has been gambling and womanizing! (Stand up) Fang Min: What?! Gennie : Gennie: Didn’t grace say to meet her here? Where is she? Ling Li: (stalking Nicholas) Where is he heading to? Fang Min: (Crying) Nicholas! (slump down) Gennie: What happened? Fang Min: It’s my father! He’s been abusing us… Ling Li: What are they talking about? What is it about loan sharks? Dammit! I can’t hear! (make a frustrated face) *remember not to laugh as this is a tense moment, not comedic* ----------------------------------------------------------------- Scene 1Gennie: (disbelief, firm) What!? (pause) I must talk to your father! Fang Min: No! he’s incorrigible! You should just go home… Gennie: But… (fang min walks away, gennie looks at fm’s back) Lingli: (When gennie turns around, LL came from her hiding place) What was that about? Gennie: (surprised) Sarah? What are you doing here? Lingli: I demand to know what is going on right now! Or is it true that you are having an affair with Grace… Gennie: No! Grace is in trouble! Ling Li: I don’t believe in you anymore! (runs away.) Gennie: (Monologue) I’m sorry sarah, but I still have to help Grace! (Return to the house) *Please be reminded that this is also a tense moment =]* Gynn: (drunk) I’m home~ (retardedly) Yu Jun: (covers nose) You reek of alcohol! Where have you been? Gynn: Stop your nagging… (walks away) Yu Jun: [Angrily] I know what you have been doing! At that gambling den and with that slut! (Grab gynn’s arm) Gynn: Get lost! (Hit YJ) {Yu jun falls unconscious} Fang Min: (returned0 Mom! (faces Gynn) What did you do to her?! (ran towards the mother) Gynn: She deserved it! And now you too! Gennie: Stop! (Gynn hit gennie and gennie falls to the ground.) *flashback stops here* ----------------------------------------------------------------- Scene 2Gynn: it’s not my fault… Fang Min: Why did you kill him!? He was my only friend! Gynn: Shut up! You don’t know anything! [try to hit fang min, fang min run] Fang Min: No! Go away!!! [Grab a knife and accidentally stab father] Gynn: Ah! [Falls to the ground, dead] Fang Min: Oh no! What have I done? Yu Jun: What… Oh my god! [wakes up to find dead ppl] Fang min: Mom! It was an accident! I swear! [ Cry] Yu Jun: No! it’s my fault! I should’ve protected you! And since it’s my fault, I shall turn myself in to the police. Fang min: No mom! [Police took yu jun away] Fang Min: (emotional) Why must this happen… now… I’m all alone…[sinks to the floor] THE END. Anyway, I have already emailed you guys the script :D Fangmin. Labels: Script Script - First draft Tuesday, September 1, 2009 @ 7:01 PMFrame 1 Gennie: Line 1: why is he doing this to his own daughter? Line 2: She is his only child. Line 3: As a friend, I have to help her. Gynn: Line 1: He knows too much. Line 2: he must die. Line 3: My daughter is too much of a hindrance to me. Fang Min: Line 1: No! why is he abusing me? Line 2: I’m his only child! Line 3: Doesn’t he have any feelings left for his family? Yu Jun: Line 1:Why is he making us suffer like this? Line 2: I regret marrying him. Line 3: Why did he change from before? Xiao Chou: Line 1: Oh my God! He killed Nicholas! Line 2: I should have believed him when he told me about the loan sharks. Line 3: Police! I have to call the police! Ling Li: Line 1: What the hell? Line 2: Who called the police? Line 3: Now my gambling den is ruined! Angela: Line 1: Oh no! What happened? Line 2: I must not get involved in this. Line 3: Before the police come, I must escape! Yu Xin: Line 1: The police? Line 2: Where’s the money? Line 3: I shall make away with the money! Frame 2 Gynn: Line 1: How did this happen? Line 2: I remember we were still a normal family a few weeks ago. Line 3: It all started at that time… Yu Xin: Line 1: [phone gynn; gynn picks up] Hello brother! Line 2: I got a good deal here! Line 3: Come along to earn quick money! Ling Li: Line 1: Yes! Line 2: Finally our next victim! Line 3: Jessica shall do her job splendidly; after all it’s what she does best! [ evil laughter] Angela: Line 1: Here comes another idiot… Line 2: Money just keeps rolling in sometimes. Line 3: All I have to do is just seduce him… [drag gynn] Yu Jun: Line 1: Is that the door closing? Line 2: Where is he going at such a late time? Line 3: I shouldn’t be too paranoid… Fang Min: Line 1: Oh! Where is father when I need him? Line 2: I don’t know how to do this question! Line 3: Perhaps Nicholas would know… Xiao Chou: Line 1: Is that Nicholas’s phone ringing? Line 2: Grace? Her again!? Line 3: What is their relationship? Gennie: Line 1: Grace is calling me. Line 2: But Sarah is being paranoid again. Line 3: Even though I told her countless of times that there’s nothing between me and her! Frame 0/3 Ling Li: Ling Li: [Gynn stands up] Don’t go! Gynn: But it’s quite late… Ling Li: Let’s have a few more rounds. Gynn: I don’t know… I might lose money… Ling Li: Don’t worry! I can feel that you are getting lucky! [Gynn sits back down, all continue playing] Yu Jun: Yu Jun: It’s quite late… I don’t even know where he is…[calls gynn] Gynn: Shit… it’s my wife…[slams phone] Angela: [picks up and answer when gynn not looking] Hello?! Yu Jun: [Hang up and stay silent, then fall to the ground crying.] Fang Min : Fang Min: Mummy! What happened? Yu Jun: Do you know what your father has been doing? Fang Min: What’s wrong? Yu Jun: He has been gambling and womanizing! Fang Min: Oh no! what should we do? Gennie : Gennie: Didn’t grace said to meet her at her house? Where is she? Xiao chou: [stalking Nicholas] Where is he heading to? Fang Min: [Crying] Oh Nicholas! Gennie: What happened? Fang Min: It’s my father! He’s been abusing us… Xiao chou: What are they talking about? What is it about loan sharks? Dammit! I can’t hear! [make a frustrated face] *remember not to laugh as this is a tense moment, not comedic* Scene 1 Part 1 Gennie: What!? I must go find your father to talk things through! Fang Min: No! he’s incorrigible! You should just go home… Gennie: But… [fang min walks away] Xiao chou: [When gennie turns around, xiao chou came from her hiding place] What was that about? Gennie: Sarah? What re you doing here? Xiao chou: I demand to know what is going on right now! Or is it true that you are having an affaire with Grace… Gennie: No! Grace is in trouble! Xiao Chou: I don’t believe in you anymore! [runs away.] Gennie: I’m sorry sarah, but I still have to help Grace! [Return to the house] *Please be reminded that this is also a tense moment =]* Part 2 Gynn: [drunk] I’m home~ Yu Jun: You reek of alcohol! Where have you been? Gynn: Stop your nagging… Yu Jun: [Angrily] I know what you have been doing! At that gambling den and with that slut! [Grab gynn’s arm] Gynn: Get lost! Do you want to get beat up again? [Hit YJ] {Yu jun falls unconscious} Fang Min: [returned] Mom! What are you doing to her?! [ran towards the mother] Gynn: She deserved it! And now you too! Gennie: Stop! [Gynn hit gennie and gennie falls to the ground.] *flashback officially stop here* Scene 2 Gynn: it’s not my fault… Fang Min: Why did you kill him!? He was my only friend! Gynn: Shut up! You don’t know anything! [try to hit fang min, fang min run] Fang Min: No! Go away!!! [Grab a knife and accidentally stab father] Gynn: Ah! [Falls to the ground, dead] Fang Min: Oh no! What have I done? Yu Jun: What… Oh my god! [wakes up to find dead ppl] Fang min: Mom! It was an accident! I swear! [ Cry] Yu Jun: No! it’s my fault! I should’ve protected you! And since it’s my fault, I shall turn myself in to the police. Fang min: No mom! [Police took yu jun away] Fang Min: Why must this happen… now… I’m all alone…[sinks to the floor] END. The final script is in the process of being revised (: Fangmin. Labels: Script |
