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 Script - Second draft  Thursday, September 10, 2009 @ 5:05 PMFrame 1 Gennie: Line 1: (looks down diagonally to the side) why is he abusing his own daughter? Line 2: She is his only child. Line 3: I have to help her. Gynn: (the stick and box) Line 1: He knows too much about my debts and gambling den. Line 2: he must die. (hits gennie. Gennie falls behind box) Line 3: (faces Grace) my daughter is too much of a hindrance to me. Fang Min: Line 1: No! why is he abusing me? Line 2: (Looking down, walking forward) I’m his only child! Line 3: (Bends down) Doesn’t he have any feelings left for his family? Yu Jun: Line 1: (Sad. Don’t do big actions) Why is he making us suffer like this? Line 2: I regret marrying him. Line 3: Why did he change from before? Ling Li: (hiding behind box) Line 1: He killed Nicholas! Line 2: I should have believed him when he told me about the loan sharks. Line 3: Police! I have to call the police! Xiao Chou: Line 1: What the hell! Line 2: Who called the police? Line 3: Now my gambling den is ruined! Angela: Line 1: Oh no! What happened? Line 2: I must not get involved in this. Line 3: Before the police come, I must escape! Yu Xin: Line 1: The police? Line 2: Where’s the money? Line 3: I shall make away with the money! Frame 2 Gynn: Line 1: How did this happen? (Walk towards the centre of the stage) Line 2: I remember we were still a normal family a few weeks ago. Line 3: It all started (slow) at that time… (look far out in the distance) Yu Xin: Line 1: (Walk to Gynn) Hello brother! (tap on back) Line 2: I got a good deal for you! Line 3: Come along to earn quick money! Xiao Chou: Line 1: (Walk around Gynn) Finally! Our next victim! Line 2: All we have to do is to land him in our debt! Line 3: Jessica will definitely be able to deceive him! Angela: (Walking to Gynn; bimbotic) Line 1: Here comes another idiot… Line 2: Money just keeps rolling in sometimes. Line 3: All I have to do is just seduce him… (drag gynn) Yu Jun: (Paranoid) Line 1: Is that the door closing? (look to the back, look over at her shoulders) Line 2: Where is he going at such a late time? Line 3: (Pause 3seconds. Look down) I shouldn’t be too paranoid… Fang Min: Line 1: (Scratches head) Oh! Where is father when I need him? Line 2: I don’t know how to do this question! Line 3: Perhaps Nicholas would know… (calls Nicolas) Ling Li: Line 1: Is that Nicholas’s phone ringing? Line 2: Is that Grace calling? Her again!? Line 3: What is their relationship? Gennie: Line 1: Oh it’s Grace! Line 2: Sarah is being paranoid again. Line 3: Even though I told her countless of times that there’s nothing between me and her! ----------------------------------------------------------------- Frame 0/3 Xiao Chou: Yuxin: (Gynn stands up. Yuxin stands up too, push Gynn down gently) Don’t go! Gynn: But it’s quite late… Yuxin: Let’s have a few more rounds. (knock table) Gynn: I don’t know… I might lose money… Xiaochou: Don’t worry! I can feel that you are getting lucky! (all continue playing) Yu Jun: (already pause) Yu Jun: It’s late… I don’t even know where he is…(calls gynn) Gynn: it’s my wife again…(slams phone) Angela: (picks up and answer when gynn not looking) Hello?! Yu Jun: (Hang up and stay silent, then fall to the ground crying.) Fang Min : Fang Min: Mum! What happened? (bend down to Yujun’s level) Yu Jun: Do you know what your father has been doing? (stare at FM) Fang Min: What’s wrong? Yu Jun: He has been gambling and womanizing! (Stand up) Fang Min: What?! Gennie : Gennie: Didn’t grace say to meet her here? Where is she? Ling Li: (stalking Nicholas) Where is he heading to? Fang Min: (Crying) Nicholas! (slump down) Gennie: What happened? Fang Min: It’s my father! He’s been abusing us… Ling Li: What are they talking about? What is it about loan sharks? Dammit! I can’t hear! (make a frustrated face) *remember not to laugh as this is a tense moment, not comedic* ----------------------------------------------------------------- Scene 1Gennie: (disbelief, firm) What!? (pause) I must talk to your father! Fang Min: No! he’s incorrigible! You should just go home… Gennie: But… (fang min walks away, gennie looks at fm’s back) Lingli: (When gennie turns around, LL came from her hiding place) What was that about? Gennie: (surprised) Sarah? What are you doing here? Lingli: I demand to know what is going on right now! Or is it true that you are having an affair with Grace… Gennie: No! Grace is in trouble! Ling Li: I don’t believe in you anymore! (runs away.) Gennie: (Monologue) I’m sorry sarah, but I still have to help Grace! (Return to the house) *Please be reminded that this is also a tense moment =]* Gynn: (drunk) I’m home~ (retardedly) Yu Jun: (covers nose) You reek of alcohol! Where have you been? Gynn: Stop your nagging… (walks away) Yu Jun: [Angrily] I know what you have been doing! At that gambling den and with that slut! (Grab gynn’s arm) Gynn: Get lost! (Hit YJ) {Yu jun falls unconscious} Fang Min: (returned0 Mom! (faces Gynn) What did you do to her?! (ran towards the mother) Gynn: She deserved it! And now you too! Gennie: Stop! (Gynn hit gennie and gennie falls to the ground.) *flashback stops here* ----------------------------------------------------------------- Scene 2Gynn: it’s not my fault… Fang Min: Why did you kill him!? He was my only friend! Gynn: Shut up! You don’t know anything! [try to hit fang min, fang min run] Fang Min: No! Go away!!! [Grab a knife and accidentally stab father] Gynn: Ah! [Falls to the ground, dead] Fang Min: Oh no! What have I done? Yu Jun: What… Oh my god! [wakes up to find dead ppl] Fang min: Mom! It was an accident! I swear! [ Cry] Yu Jun: No! it’s my fault! I should’ve protected you! And since it’s my fault, I shall turn myself in to the police. Fang min: No mom! [Police took yu jun away] Fang Min: (emotional) Why must this happen… now… I’m all alone…[sinks to the floor] THE END. Anyway, I have already emailed you guys the script :D Fangmin. Labels: Script |